A woman in love is a tormented soul
She craves for the touch…
A feeling of entwining of the body & the soul
And embarking on journeys of rich ecstasy
That saps away the energies and yet leaves you feeling strong
A woman in love is a tormented soul
She craves for a consciousness that is steeped in togetherness
That brings in an immense aura of exploding galaxies
A bond that glows in thick character and faith
A connection that electrifies the very being
And brings a certain calm to the rapids fast flowing
A woman in love is a tormented soul
She craves the smells that promises his presence
She strings together the feats of selfless gestures
And cobbles up scattered dreams
Pleading with her fate to let them be
A woman in love is a tormented soul
Her world has suddenly shrunk
Accommodating only things that matter the most
Her life has a single goal
To bring a smile on the lips that make her come alive
And pump fire into her spirit
A woman in love is a tormented soul
She’s prepared to walk the path that tests
And brings to its knees great legends
A love so sublime that emits the rays
Of passion that cements forever!
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Hello Vijay,
Welcome to my blogspace. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Bunty.
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Hey Juliaaaa...how are you? I'm not very regular here so didnt notice your absence. We are in the same boat yaar...lol!

I say...all work and no play makes a tormented soul anguish a bit more....
Bunty.
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A woman in love is surrendered for so many things that's life. In fact each and every organism in this world is surrendered to something or the other. Your poem is really touching and nicely written. Keep up the good work.
With regards,
Vijay
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Hi Buns,

A woman in love is surrendered too to the craving of her heart.
You know what, I am rarely on Sul these days coz I too am a tormented soul, only it is work, work work....
Julia
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Hello Kiran,

Good to see you here.
The difference between a woman and a man is this...a woman is tormented about things she does not have and a man is tormented only when he loses them. And yet we go around complicating our lives. Doesn't make sense na? Wonder why we do what we do....
Bunty.
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hi buntyjee thanks for the call yesterday ..
A good one. .. hope every man gets the woman in love without a tormented soul but a beautiful soothing soul
Can you right similar passages for a man in love is a tormented soul :)
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Gajrohit,
Welcome! You are a good man...lol! Thanks for sharing your perspective here.
Bunty.
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Hiya Choco,


What da ya mean by "crude"? were you trying to say "raw" coz that it is.....lol!
Thanks for coming over....
Bunty.
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A Man in Love is equally Tormented especially if it is Unrequited
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Bunty,
This indeed has depth...and that too so strong and crude that is carried since ages and will go on till many ages...Such is the power of sacrifice that only a woman can have!
Loved this :)
Choco
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